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My North Star

My North Star

Pubblicato 28 dic 2024 Aggiornato 28 dic 2024 Poetry and Songs
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Ridin’ through the dusty trail, the sun begins to fade,

A lone cowboy with a heavy heart, life begins to wane.

With a bullet in his back, he knows he won't go far,

But all he wants to do now is die under his star.


Mountains rise around him, shadows growing long,

He remembers distant valleys where his spirit once belonged.

No family waits to mourn him, no children and no wife,

Just the whispers of the prairie in echoes of his life.


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One last ride through the plains, under the dying glow,

On this lonely track, where the wildflowers grow.

No tears to cry, no goodbyes to say,

Just a cowboy’s final sunset, his last day.


Freedom's been his lover, 'neath the wide open sky,

He’ll be fading away tonight, leavin’ no one to cry.

Just him, his gun, his boots, a saddle and his horse,

He’ll depart to n

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Gand Laetitia verif

Gand Laetitia 10 mesi fa

coup de coeur de ma journée, merci

I love it. Great !!

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Franck Labat 10 mesi fa

Merci Laetitia. La country tend à me rendre un peu mélancolique. À moins que ce ne soit la charge émotionnelle de mes persos du moment qui suinte. 😥

Gand Laetitia verif

Gand Laetitia 10 mesi fa

pour ma part, cela me donne plus envie de danser

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Franck Labat 10 mesi fa

À l'occaz' j'essaie de trouver un texte plus guilleret avec de la country plus "danse en ligne". 😉

Gand Laetitia verif

Gand Laetitia 10 mesi fa

super, oui !! Cela mettra de l'animation ici.

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Franck Labat 10 mesi fa

Je finalise, elle sera en ligne dans 5 minutes ;-)

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Imoto 10 mesi fa

I truly love itttt, cowboy!

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Franck Labat 10 mesi fa

Thx Imoto, I had an urge to write country those past 2 days 😉
Never tackled this genre before. It's quite liberating, sort of free flowing and focused more on the storytelling. I like it.

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