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Published Jul 10, 2025 Updated Jul 10, 2025 Poetry and Songs
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Suite à l’écriture de ce haïku j’ai effectué une petite correction. En retirant le LA, j’arrivais à 5 syllabes et ça ne changeait pas grand chose. Alors, la nouvelle version est ici bas :


Punaise de lit

s’en retourne sous les draps

vivre un cauchemar.

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